Sunday Small Stone 57

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   Jarod Anderson

   June 2, 2013 at 2:20 pm

   I’m having trouble parsing out the last three lines, but I like the natural unease of this quite a bit. 🙂

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     ekswitaj

     June 2, 2013 at 2:30 pm

     I’ve deleted a word to improve the rhythm—not sure if it eases the parsing (it is a bit twisted deliberately for the “natural unease” to which you point).

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