the quiet Sunday wind
skips the garbage on the gray
sidewalk & exposed
it lifts the eggshell
slats of blinds
to bring the blooming trees inside
evening's third frantic clang of fire alarm where fire is not bruises the head past Saturday drinking drowns out the...
if it is bring the new life of green inside, its not a bad thing…nice imagery though as i can easily see the garbage caught in the wind….
I like, alot!!!!!! A few very choice words, vivid and expressive. Lets bring the blooing trees inside.
It takes great talent to create a scene, a moment, an all-encompassing sensation with few words. Love your small stones.
A fleeting moment well captured. A jewel!
Thanks all. I think this was the first moment this year when it felt like spring.