Poem: Leaving Autumn

every window opens with the right blade
I let you in my grain

                                  dark home
                            and now regret the light
you let in & left
                            me with only filters
to turn sky sepia
                             and the leaves
                               which will soon fall

written in response to Mag 36

a photograph of a dark wood panel in a door opening to the outside, revealing sepia-toned trees

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10 comments for “Poem: Leaving Autumn

  1. October 13, 2010 at 11:56 pm

    a poem written apt to the picture…turn sky sepia…:) Nice

  2. October 14, 2010 at 2:51 am

    I like sepia skies. Nice.

  3. Diane T
    October 14, 2010 at 8:48 am

    Brilliant! I love your style!

  4. October 14, 2010 at 10:29 pm

    Regret is nicely shown in this piece!

  5. October 15, 2010 at 1:30 am

    Learning from ones mistakes also helps to ease the regret. The pain of heartbreak, you captured it beautifully with this piece.

  6. October 15, 2010 at 4:09 pm

    lovely words-

  7. October 16, 2010 at 1:09 pm

    the leaves soo falling…the double meanings in these words play nice with the coming of the light and what it brings…nice magpie!

  8. October 17, 2010 at 1:31 am

    interesting and unique! great magpie!

  9. October 17, 2010 at 4:36 pm

    I hear the sound of your words.
    profound magpie.

  10. October 19, 2010 at 2:20 am

    Uniquely interesting piece… love the sepia skies.

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